Did you feel the character development was meaningful and appropriate?
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Did you feel the character development was meaningful and appropriate?
What did you think of the plot?
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Angie, I agree. I couldn't see any real or meaningful growth happen for any of the characters, except maybe Dave Thompson as he grew in confidence. I felt the lawyers were pretty typecast as either "good and ethical" or "bad and deceitful," and the "bad" lawyers definitely didn't seem to learn anything from the experience.Angie Fernandez wrote: ↑22 Oct 2023, 09:25 I thought the plot was excellent, full of intrigue, emotion, and suspense. However, I would have liked to see a little more character development. How were Bess, Sheriff Johnson, and Doretta feeling throughout the trial, and how were they changed due to the accident and verdict? The author spent a lot of time focusing on the legal aspects of the trial, and details that I thought were superfluous.
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I felt the same. Dave Thompson and Ted Born seemed to have some good development through the book. The other characters though either got none or it all happened at the end of the book in one go as a sudden change.Kathy Smith 16 wrote: ↑22 Oct 2023, 17:09Angie, I agree. I couldn't see any real or meaningful growth happen for any of the characters, except maybe Dave Thompson as he grew in confidence. I felt the lawyers were pretty typecast as either "good and ethical" or "bad and deceitful," and the "bad" lawyers definitely didn't seem to learn anything from the experience.Angie Fernandez wrote: ↑22 Oct 2023, 09:25 I thought the plot was excellent, full of intrigue, emotion, and suspense. However, I would have liked to see a little more character development. How were Bess, Sheriff Johnson, and Doretta feeling throughout the trial, and how were they changed due to the accident and verdict? The author spent a lot of time focusing on the legal aspects of the trial, and details that I thought were superfluous.


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