Official Review: Within the stars by Rachel marie lavita

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Re: Official Review: Within the stars by Rachel marie lavita

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Cotwani wrote: 13 May 2019, 07:07
Each boy is painstakingly described, all the way down to their star signs.
Lol! Never occurred to me I could use zodiac signs in describing people. To use your words, we learn something new every day!

Great review!
Exactly! :lol2:
Thanks so much!
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Bianka Walter wrote: 08 May 2019, 03:12
AKShanmar12 wrote: 07 May 2019, 16:07 Wow! It sounds like they published in the early formatting stage. The idea is one of those timeless ones that certainly could be reworked into a good tale. Hopefully, the author will take your advice even though I'm sure it will be a bit painful.
It is a timeless idea. Thank you for commenting!
You are very welcome!
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