Romance scenes you wish to change
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VAwkOb12
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Romance scenes you wish to change
Was there ever a time you wanted to change a scene in a romance/erotic novel because it made you feel a little weird ?
If so then which scene was it and from which novel?
If so then which scene was it and from which novel?
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lucia_kizas
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Yes! I can't remember the exact title now, but, wow, the sex scenes were like a transcription of a porn video... bad acting and too much dirty talking included. The story was quite OK, but then these scenes happened... OK, so I looked it up - it was "Spin" by C.D. Reiss.
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Nisha Ward
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Yeah, a lot of books make me want to do that, too many to name really. I just wish they would read better as sex scenes.
"...while a book has got to be worthwhile from the point of view of the reader it's got to be worthwhile from the point of view of the writer as well." - Terry Pratchett on The Last Continent and his writing.
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Yes, that happens many times. Especially when the sex scenes seem very mechanical.
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VAwkOb12
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I have the same experience with romance novels. Some of them are just so weird
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mariana90
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Not because it made me feel weird, but can we please change the ending of Romeo and Juliet? Lol I just keep hoping she's going to wake up before he finishes his monologue hahaha
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And also, I would like to remove EVERY single reference to the "inner goddess" in 50 shades.
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Yes, like when a novel talks of a threesome where the guy is okay sharing his wife with another.
