Official Review: Perfect. by D. D. Larsen

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Re: Official Review: Perfect. by D. D. Larsen

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Too many shortfalls in one book! I think there is a need for a revision so that the book may appeal to a wider reading audience. Great review. Congratulations.
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The review showed what to expect in the book, including the fact that there's strong language in book. Thank you for your honest review.
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Although Seryna might believe in Mr. Perfect, a more mature audience might find Kieran's perfection a bit too much. I wish the mystery and suspense would prevail over the erotic scenes. Thanks for a great review!
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Thanks for the heads up regarding sexual abuse in the story. I find that something I can't tolerate so will have to pass on this one.
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Perfect seems not so after all. One review says that any girl would want to be in Seryna's place. Very catchy words! Since the book is free, let me find the truth to that claim.
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A very interesting and diverse set of characters in the fiction novel "Perfect." by D. D. Larsen. The story revolves around Kieran Black, who saves the Seryna from impending danger more than once like a knight in shining armor. Hope the author fixes the grammatical errors and makes it pleasurable to read. I like to read this book later.
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I wonder if Mr. Kieran Black is hiding something which will eventually make him seem less "perfect", after all. As this is only the first book of the series, I think it's definitely a possibility. Thank you for your great review!
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This romance novel with a pinch of action definitely captured my attention. It sounds interesting and based on your analysis, it's revision will definitely make it more appealing. Thanks for the detailed review.
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The book is about romantic stories. the author describes the immediate love that developed between the participants. The author in this book describes the patience, resentment and various events that arise in relationships.
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The story sounds interesting but I don't think I'll enjoy the book. The things you said about the narrative kind of deter me from reading the book. Also, it's not really my type of read. Thanks for the insightful review!
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An erotic thriller that focuses more on the eroticism than the plot is a definite flaw. However it would be interesting to understand what drives the main characters to their actions, which is my favorite part of a romance thriller like this. I am particularly intrigued by the near perfect character depiction of the male character and how the author has fleshed him out. Well detailed review!
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Post by aylanobrega »

I agree with a love that you said in the review, specially the normalization of harassment. But I don't think Kieran was perfect, he was weirdly jealous and enjoyed way too much the fact that she was inexperienced.
Also, I did not find the thriller part good at all haha very predictable (maybe I read way too much thriller novels haha)
Thank you for the great review!
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Ummmm. Sorry, that's a no for me. The girl may be 18 but is still in highschool and having a relationship with an older man. Weird circumstances for an erotic novel. Congrats on BOTD. Fantastic review.
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I'm not looking up to read straight-up sex in this eye-rolling, fantasy-land of a relationship, this is not my cup of tea. Nice review.
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