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Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 06 May 2019, 07:13
by VAwkOb12
Was there ever a time you wanted to change a scene in a romance/erotic novel because it made you feel a little weird ?
If so then which scene was it and from which novel?
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 19 May 2019, 05:17
by lucia_kizas
Yes! I can't remember the exact title now, but, wow, the sex scenes were like a transcription of a porn video... bad acting and too much dirty talking included. The story was quite OK, but then these scenes happened... OK, so I looked it up - it was "Spin" by C.D. Reiss.
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 19 May 2019, 05:22
by Nisha Ward
Yeah, a lot of books make me want to do that, too many to name really. I just wish they would read better as sex scenes.
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 19 May 2019, 11:31
by zainherb
Yes, that happens many times. Especially when the sex scenes seem very mechanical.
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 24 May 2019, 01:27
by VAwkOb12
I have the same experience with romance novels. Some of them are just so weird
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 24 Jul 2019, 19:31
by mariana90
Not because it made me feel weird, but can we please change the ending of Romeo and Juliet? Lol I just keep hoping she's going to wake up before he finishes his monologue hahaha
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 24 Jul 2019, 19:32
by mariana90
And also, I would like to remove EVERY single reference to the "inner goddess" in 50 shades.
Re: Romance scenes you wish to change
Posted: 25 Jul 2019, 08:35
by Florence Nalianya
VAwkOb12 wrote: ↑06 May 2019, 07:13
Was there ever a time you wanted to change a scene in a romance/erotic novel because it made you feel a little weird ?
If so then which scene was it and from which novel?
Yes, like when a novel talks of a threesome where the guy is okay sharing his wife with another.