Review of Bespelled
Posted: 15 Jul 2022, 01:09
[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Bespelled" by Satyra Kent.]
“Can you say you have a love life if you don’t have one?” In Satayra Kent's Bespelled, Deena wants an answer to this question. Deena is a witch looking for her soulmate. Her efforts with a dating website have led her to being stood up three times in the past three weeks. She tells her woes to Aunt Ro after the third failed date, and then goes to her apartment with a bottle of wine. While drunk, Deena casts a spell to find love. She substitutes ingredients and has problems reading the directions for the spell. A hopeful Deena falls asleep and has an erotic dream involving her crush, Taber. When Deena wakes up, she feels boundless energy and is ecstatic about how good she feels. At work, she notices everyone in the office gravitate toward her. She also feels arousal building and feels the need to fulfill her desire. What spell did Deena unleash while drunk?
Kent made Deena’s behavior relatable to normal people. I can easily imagine how I would feel if someone stood me up. Deena’s crush, Taber, seems unattainable to her. I thought it was interesting how her Aunt Ro keeps Taber’s secret when Deena feels so rejected. Her Aunt Ro is a powerful witch, and I understood Deena’s shame with her actions to not seek help from her. The descriptions of Deena’s surroundings are vivid, allowing me to picture what was going on around her. I found a many humorous moments. One example was Deena’s experience in a grocery store. Her presence had people making out and taking off their clothes with strangers. Could you imagine being in the bread aisle and seeing two elderly people acting that way?
Bespelled is a fast read because it filled every moment with action and engaging dialogue. I liked how the emotional aspects took over the physical actions of the sex acts. However, everything Deena encounters is in detail. It wasn’t revealed until close to the end what Deena’s spell did. The unpredictable nature of how the story unfolds keeps the necessity to keep reading unquestionable. I couldn’t put the book down because my imagination ran wild on the different outcomes Kent had made possible.
3 out of 4 stars is what I can give this romantic comedy. I encountered over ten errors. I had to read some sentences several times to figure out what was being said. There were missing words and mismatching pronouns appear frequently. It would be beneficial to do another round of editing. Beyond editing, this book is perfect for a light read.
It is obvious this book is for adult readers. Bespelled is a brilliant choice if you like romantic comedies with well-developed characters. I have to caution readers as there are several explicit sex scenes and magic spell chants depicted in the book. This is an erotic fiction story that will make readers laugh out loud.
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Bespelled
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“Can you say you have a love life if you don’t have one?” In Satayra Kent's Bespelled, Deena wants an answer to this question. Deena is a witch looking for her soulmate. Her efforts with a dating website have led her to being stood up three times in the past three weeks. She tells her woes to Aunt Ro after the third failed date, and then goes to her apartment with a bottle of wine. While drunk, Deena casts a spell to find love. She substitutes ingredients and has problems reading the directions for the spell. A hopeful Deena falls asleep and has an erotic dream involving her crush, Taber. When Deena wakes up, she feels boundless energy and is ecstatic about how good she feels. At work, she notices everyone in the office gravitate toward her. She also feels arousal building and feels the need to fulfill her desire. What spell did Deena unleash while drunk?
Kent made Deena’s behavior relatable to normal people. I can easily imagine how I would feel if someone stood me up. Deena’s crush, Taber, seems unattainable to her. I thought it was interesting how her Aunt Ro keeps Taber’s secret when Deena feels so rejected. Her Aunt Ro is a powerful witch, and I understood Deena’s shame with her actions to not seek help from her. The descriptions of Deena’s surroundings are vivid, allowing me to picture what was going on around her. I found a many humorous moments. One example was Deena’s experience in a grocery store. Her presence had people making out and taking off their clothes with strangers. Could you imagine being in the bread aisle and seeing two elderly people acting that way?
Bespelled is a fast read because it filled every moment with action and engaging dialogue. I liked how the emotional aspects took over the physical actions of the sex acts. However, everything Deena encounters is in detail. It wasn’t revealed until close to the end what Deena’s spell did. The unpredictable nature of how the story unfolds keeps the necessity to keep reading unquestionable. I couldn’t put the book down because my imagination ran wild on the different outcomes Kent had made possible.
3 out of 4 stars is what I can give this romantic comedy. I encountered over ten errors. I had to read some sentences several times to figure out what was being said. There were missing words and mismatching pronouns appear frequently. It would be beneficial to do another round of editing. Beyond editing, this book is perfect for a light read.
It is obvious this book is for adult readers. Bespelled is a brilliant choice if you like romantic comedies with well-developed characters. I have to caution readers as there are several explicit sex scenes and magic spell chants depicted in the book. This is an erotic fiction story that will make readers laugh out loud.
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Bespelled
View: on Bookshelves | on Amazon