I don't know how to write
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Start small. And above all, start by reading. Try James Joyce's immortal short story collection "Dubliners" for start. Why? Because it's a starter guide to true modern fiction. Read the story "Araby" for example. See how perfectly Joyce creates the tension and frustration of the narrator, his dilemma, and how desperate he is for a resolution. And sadly, the letdown. ("Araby" is one of the saddest but greatest short stories that Joyce ever wrote).
Nevertheless, study the story and read it 2-3 times (it's short enough) and see how he works at the reader's psyche. Perfection. And the reason I'm picking Joyce's "Araby" is twofold... It's a great classic story, not too long, but perfectly illustrative. And also, it's free for download from Amazon and elsewhere if you don't already have a copy of Dubliners.
Next, don't repeat or don't try to emulate Joyce. Don't emulate ANY other writer! But just take a small personal situation. Let me suggest a couple of possibles... You (the narrator) have to make a sales appointment and your car won't start. And you knew, you knew yesterday that it was being cranky and you told yourself you'd check the battery connections as soon as you could, but then forgot, and forgot to remind yourself to not forget! So try to describe the frustration in real, honest terms, as you'd actually feel.
Or, your daughter is in a school play and the part she's got isn't a flattering one. So you have to see the play and judge her acting not on the character she's playing but on her skill in playing the character. This frustrates you and you've got a dilemma in your heart of hearts.
Or, you're in a meeting with some corporate bigwigs and your company is trying to sell them on a new advertising campaign, that your agency should be hired. But midway through the presentation, your boss gets the concept all wrong and you're stuck with trying to backpedal while in the meeting but not upbraiding you boss' well meant mistake.
Or you set your own dilemma. This is what is called a writing exercise. Use Joyce's "Araby" and its excruciating sadness, and learn from it without emulating it, and write a small, very short story. Maybe even just a small scene in that longer story. Try to depict frustration using your own emotions, using Joyce not as a copycat effort but as a guidepost. I hope I'm making sense here.
Start small. Write just a few short pages about some possible frustrating event that maybe you've had, or can imaging having (my suggestions are just that, choose your own dilemma).
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For a short time I was a reporter for a local newspaper and some say this means I am published and a professional writer (not the same as an author I think) but to me it was just a stint and I don't feel like a published author/writer. I don't know if I can flesh the unfinished stories out but one day I will try.
Up until now raising a family, working a full time job with two part-time jobs occasionally, trying to complete my college degree, and commuting from the middle of nowhere to do it all has affected my writing time but still I try. (I know-just excuses) And, I will continue to work at it so that one day soon, I will succeed with at least one of the stories if not more. I will and so can you. Just don't quit.
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Just start! You'll make mistakes and your first efforts will fall flat, but keep at it, keep improving your skills. Accept feedback and criticism and learn from your early errors and tweak your writing so that it's better and better.
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STEPS FOR GETTING ORGANIZED
First thing you want to do is get everything down on paper
Get a few notebooks and designate one for story ideas, and the others for individual stories.
In the first note book write down all the ideas for stories that you have. Then select the story that you think about the most and designate a note book for it.
In the notebook that you have just designated write down what you want the story to be about
Then write down the characters
Have a page or two bait each character; their looks, their past, their personality
Then outline the book; the big things you want to happen in the story, how it should end, and possibilities for sequels or just a solid ending
Next you want to outline some chapters; get the first five chapters outlined at least that way you don't get stuck while writing.
When you outline the chapters it's the same as outlining the book; you point out the big things you want to happen in the chapter but you also give more focus to the little things. The small things that make connections throughout the chapters to contribute to the plot.
Finally you start writing; I think the first chapter is always the hardest so maybe you might want to skip over to and write it later. It doesn't really matter what order the book is in. Or you could start the book from the middle of the story and fill in the rest of the story throughout the books.
I hope this helps!
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It's not absolutely necessary to take each of the steps listed -- understand them as suggestions only, and cherrypick the ones that help you best.
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