Review of Beyond the veil

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Review of Beyond the veil

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Beyond the veil" by Timothy Cooleen.]
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Beautifully crafted by Timothy Cooleen, the novel Beyond the Veil is an interesting read. Being a historical novel, the story dates back to 724 AD. 

The novel begins with the beautiful, romantic love story of Cael and Lochanna, followed by that of Padraig the King and Mora the Queen. But it is not just about some mere love stories—it's a story of two kingdoms—totally opposite—one strong with a king who deeply loves and cares about his subjects and the other who doesn't. The story of people who were consumed by greed until one day, the greed consumed them. It is a story where the people live to see and die to protect the Ancient Dream of Conn. 

Tolmagh, the traitor, allies with the king of another kingdom to kill his king and queen so that he can sit on the throne. And being partially successful, the king makes his journey beyond the veil. The queen is entrusted with the responsibility of the kingdom. But with a traitor in the council and the king dead, can Queen Mora, with her trusted ones, save the kingdom from its fall? Will the Ancient Dream of Conn come true? Dive into reading to sprinkle water on the fire of curiosity.

Divided into scenes rather than the usual boring chapters, the book is unique. And adding to its speciality, the book sounds poetic with the use of inversion, a figure of speech. Moreover, the storyline was compelling with its beautiful seasoning of romance. Furthermore, the book seemed to be well edited, as the ratio of the number of errors to the size of the novel was almost negligible. Lastly, there isn't anything about the book that I disliked, nor could I think of any improvement that is needed.

Consisting of mature themes, this novel is best suited for people over 16 who love historical themes and interesting stories that leave them on the edge. 

Finally, weighing all the merits and demerits of the book as mentioned above, I would like to rate it a solid 5 out of 5 stars.

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I am curious about the Ancient Dream of Conn. I hope it can help Queen Mora save the kingdom. She must find the traitor and banish or punish them. I will enjoy reading this historical novel. Great Review!
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This book fills you with expectations and curiosity about what will happen.
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Gerry Steen wrote: 07 Aug 2024, 20:15 I am curious about the Ancient Dream of Conn. I hope it can help Queen Mora save the kingdom. She must find the traitor and banish or punish them. I will enjoy reading this historical novel. Great Review!
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Jennyfer Alvarado wrote: 07 Aug 2024, 23:12 This book fills you with expectations and curiosity about what will happen.
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“Beyond the Veil” by Timothy Cooleen sounds like a captivating blend of history, romance, and intrigue set against the backdrop of ancient kingdoms. The focus on betrayal, loyalty, and the struggle for power, all woven into a poetic narrative structure, makes it seem like a rich and immersive read. This novel appears to offer a unique storytelling experience for those who appreciate historical fiction with depth and nuance.
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Post by Emmanuel Chima 3 »

*Beyond the Veil* by Timothy Cooleen offers a compelling historical narrative set in 724 AD, blending romance with political intrigue. Its unique structure, poetic style, and minimal editing errors make it a standout read. Ideal for mature readers who enjoy rich historical settings and dramatic storytelling.
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*Beyond the Veil* by Timothy Cooleen makes it sound like a fascinating read, especially with its mix of historical intrigue and romance. I'm intrigued by the unique structure and poetic style you mentioned. This definitely sounds like a novel worth exploring!"
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This review shows that the author has crafted this to give the best satisfactory read to the readers. I look forward to it. Usually, historical books can start slow and tilt towards boring but including scenes adds a unique layer to the book.
I look forward to it. Thanks for the captivating review.
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Thank you for such a vivid and enthralling review. Your description of the intertwining love stories and the clash of kingdoms has piqued my interest. The poetic style and unique structure sound intriguing, making this novel seem like a captivating journey into history. Definitely on my reading list!
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The way the author developed the characters was really well done. Each one felt distinct and interesting. The plot wasn’t as engaging at times, but the characters kept me invested.
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