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Brigitta Hegyi
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Wow, it was so frightening, I went faster to see the ending. Nice job!
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That was creepy! I actually thought there was a man in the closet calling her saying that, then suddenly a baby is hanging from a hanger bleeding. I'm glad she only imagined it. If there was a prize involved, you would've earned it. :-)
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