Good girl

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Good girl

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Good girl

Good daughter. Who is respectful and quiet, Tidy and helpful. Good student with straight A’s never causes disruptions because she doesn’t speak. Good friend who let’s others walk all over her. Good worker who does her job and more. Good overachiever girl who still can’t get anywhere. Good wife who keeps the bills paid and the house clean, let’s her husband do whatever So the act holds up

Good girl pushed to the edge

Good girl who’s Gotten angry

Good girl who gave it all she had

And got nothing in return

Good girl got depressed

Good girl gave up

Good girl couldn’t be the good girl anymore

Good girl became a shell

Now good girl yells and throws stuff and cries

Everyone shakes their heads and wonders why

Good girl wants to be alone and doesn’t want to talk

Good girl give up Good friends because she isn’t getting what she wants

Good girl swears and sleeps and let’s the house get messy

Good girl driven insane by being good

Theirs no rewards for being what everyone wanted

For do exactly as you should

So good girl gave up

Goodbye good girl

Thank you for trying
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