A vision

[Muhumuza Answer]

Crushing through cosmotic storms,
the battle between life and death.
A space in time with no limit,
was a black hole adjacent to me.

Should I let it engulf me,
To discover what's beyond the the light,
Or will I die in search for a new world.
It's the fear of the unknown.

Alas! time will not stop,
For my heart so indecesive.
In that invisibility, concealed by gravity,
Was pain from the death of a great star.

With in the portal, my vision was clear.
A cup full of desire and vengelance,
for a will so conscious.
On a mission to accomplish,
was a precious relic,
At the depth of this cosmotic ocean.

[Muhumuza Answer]

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A vision
by Muhumuza Answer » less than a minute ago

Crushing through cosmotic storms,
the battle between life and death.
A space in time with no limit,
was a black hole adjacent to me.

Should I let it engulf me,
To discover what's beyond the the light,
Or will I die in search for a new world.
It's the fear of the unknown.

Alas! time will not stop,
For my heart so indecesive.
In that invisibility, concealed by gravity,
Was pain from the death of a great star.

With in the portal, my vision was clear.
A cup full of desire and vengelance,
for a will so conscious.
On a mission to accomplish,
was a precious relic,
At the depth of this cosmotic ocean.

[Sarna Farjana]

In this poem i feel some line truly describe how I feel." Should I let it engulf me, to discover what's beyond the light, or will I die in search for a new world. It's the fear of the unknown". I always fear of unknown things to happen with me. And there is a line said "Alas! Time Will not stop" . Time never stop for anyone. So we have to do things within time. I love the way you describe the value of time in your poems.