A prom for my Mum

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Letanya Ullbricht 1
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A prom for my Mum

Post by Letanya Ullbricht 1 »

"Echoes of Memories"

In silence, I hear your voice
A whispered promise, a heartfelt choice
To hold on to memories of you
Though you're gone, my heart stays true

Time may heal, but won't erase
The ache of losing your loving face
I'll hold on to laughter, tears, and sighs
Echoes of memories that never say goodbye

In dreams, I see your smiling eyes
A suttle glimpse of paradise
But morning awakens, and we apart
Leaving me with this hollowed heart

Yet, even in grief, I'll find a way
To celebrate the life we shared each day
To honor your memory, I'll hold on tight
To the love we had, and the light you brought to my life.
Love you always...
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Post by DATo »

A beautiful tribute! This is a poem that anyone whose mother has passed can relate to. I know your mother would be proud of it as I'm sure she was of you.
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Post by Hillary Ibe »

This is a brilliant poem...it invoked my emotions
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