What Grace Means to Me

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Syed Abdullah 9
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:techie-studyingbrown: “What Grace Means to Me” is an evocative poem that, through personal and spiritual understandings, is able to speak to the phenomena of grace in all sweetness and mystery. The poet walks the line between vulnerability and reverence as he/she/they honesty shares his/her/their thoughts with the reader regarding something that is greater than words. Each use of simple but evocative language is carefully deliberate, allowing the reader to stay connected while also having the emotional weight it deserves. Each phrase connects to the next. Each line carries with it the sense that a reflection is moving forward. The poet works themes of humility, forgiveness, love, and divine love; and the strength of the poet’s voice is clear and gentle in its authenticity. As each of the readers knows from experience, poetry that is earned, as opposed to preached or philosophized is far more convincing and transformative and the author takes recollections of playing with it with both love and trust. It is personal narration and an invitation to the reader to consider what grace means for him/her/them. More broadly, “What Grace Means to Me” will provoke reflection and is very moving; it provides warmth, light, and sweetness and for this reader it was reassuring to hear, especially during this time.
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Post by Da Mini »

A piece that makes you stop and think. That was a good one.
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Your poems are very interesting and touching. You are very talented in writing poetry. This poem describes a person to be themself.
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A good poem to read and ponder upon.
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Post by lani Roberts 1 »

I read your poem and it speaks many things to me.
I like the fact that you keep positive thoughts among negative ones.
Very emotionally uplifting
. Thank you.
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Post by Anam Shahid 1 »

The best description ever of the journey of a person fighting and figuring out how to maintain the balance between do's and don'ts without diminishing one's own existence.Very beautiful and simple words explaining the gradual gaining of self actualization.💟
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Post by Simran Simran 14 »

I like it but it is very monotonous, very repetitive but at the same time meaningful, So I like it :)
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Post by Darshana Pradeep »

It's a simple poem with so much meaning in it. I think everyone can relate to this poem. Personally I love this!!
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Post by Melissa Gutierrez 4 »

I like it.. 💗
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Post by Joshua Godhand »

This poem has really bless my life I mean it totally
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Post by Tommy Combs »

I can tell that you have given this piece a lot of heartfelt thinking. If that is a recent picture of you, there is a lot of living in your future. I hope you accomplish all the things that you mentioned in your poem. But I think the real world may bring some disappointments, but I am pulling for you to come through.
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Post by Ramaa Vaishnavi Abbireddi »

I like the poem it's meaningful. But, I like the poems with a little lesser lines/ few lines.
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Post by Shivani Nirmal »

Loved this poem. This truly signifies how an actual human can be as there is a balance between self awareness and action.Understood each of the line of this poem.Thanks for it because it helps to change our view exactly how whatever be we do needs to be. Thanks!!
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Post by Kashaf wajid »

I really like it.. this poem is something that tell the meaning of living a life
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Post by Kiwi 097 »

The poem is beautiful, I liked the poems exploration of contrasting ideas, the contrast between bravery and fearlessness is a really insightful perspective.
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