What Grace Means to Me
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What’s really nice is the rhythm. It flows in a way that feels natural, almost like a breath cycle—tense then release, tense then release. And it doesn’t scream for attention, but it makes you listen. It’s reflective without being preachy.
If there’s anything “bad” about it, I’d say maybe it tries to do too much in one go. There are so many contrasts that by the end, it risks overwhelming the reader, like you’ve been through a whole philosophy course in a single sitting. It might hit harder if you broke it into sections or gave the reader a little more space to breathe between thoughts.
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This piece is brooding with
Phenomenal pleasant thoughts. You are immensely
talented. The poem gives
much inspiration and skillful
knowledge.
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Being motivated but not greedy etc. This can be easily mistaken by other people in our life. If we are able to find a balance between these two then we would lead a life without regret. Very thoughtful and well written poem
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