What Grace Means to Me

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Oweifa Ayebanengiyefa
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

Post by Oweifa Ayebanengiyefa »

I love the poem it is saying lot and not saying too much at same time ,and it is inspiring and wonderful to read and an amazing title ❤️.
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Post by Devaki Bhumij »

I can understand the life which we are living now.the poem can be related to our daily values and after applying it , changes can be brought for betterment.there are few i follow from the poem not all the thoughts.but it's true from the poets point of view.
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Post by Rayana wambui »

It is a very interesting poem with Avery relatable message ☺️... about living life with a balance 🫶🏼... it's very nice 🙂
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Post by Ayat Zubi »

This is such a great poem . Basically its give us motivation and knowledge. So it's must read poem for me .
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Post by Tulasi Padmaja »

I think it's a nice one which tells how the ideal qualities should have to survival as drawin theory survival of the fittest. Like every quality makes us survive with our problems.
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Post by Sunshine Jackson »

This poem is a very short and illustrated way on how we should live our lives,it's a very thoughtful and creative way of live perspective.
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Post by Fathima Rimziya »

Truly amazing it says how should a human live in this world to be exact human qualities
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Post by Sifen Nigusu »

it feels like it came from someone who’s been through a lot, wrestled with their inner world, and is trying to write themselves into the person they want to be. It’s raw and wise in that way. There’s something beautiful about how honest it is. It doesn’t pretend life is perfect or easy—it accepts pain, contradiction, and complexity, but refuses to let those things rule you. That’s powerful.

What’s really nice is the rhythm. It flows in a way that feels natural, almost like a breath cycle—tense then release, tense then release. And it doesn’t scream for attention, but it makes you listen. It’s reflective without being preachy.

If there’s anything “bad” about it, I’d say maybe it tries to do too much in one go. There are so many contrasts that by the end, it risks overwhelming the reader, like you’ve been through a whole philosophy course in a single sitting. It might hit harder if you broke it into sections or gave the reader a little more space to breathe between thoughts.
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Post by Tracy Adams 3 »

You have an immense talent.
This piece is brooding with
Phenomenal pleasant thoughts. You are immensely
talented. The poem gives
much inspiration and skillful
knowledge.
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Post by Kavya N 3 »

There is a thin line between those two words. For example: being confident but not arrogant,
Being motivated but not greedy etc. This can be easily mistaken by other people in our life. If we are able to find a balance between these two then we would lead a life without regret. Very thoughtful and well written poem
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Post by Ntsebane Anna Ngwenya »

Ohh ...This was a beautiful piece. I loved it.
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Post by Geetali Joshi »

The poem is a great reflection of the poet's understanding of a contended life. The way poet puts focus on true feelings and stuff that drives the feeling to attain grace is truly remarkable.
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