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Fooxie Darkbloom
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My head says hold on; my heart says why should I
My head says let him go; my heart says no never
My head says he'll bring more pain; my heart says so what
My head says it's not your fault; my heart how is it not
My head says he worth it, my heart of course
My head says do u love him; my heart yes always
My head lives on but my heart is in shreds
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I like that, Fooxie.
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Thank you :D
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You're welcome!
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Looks like a great poem.
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This is great. There's always that battle between mind and heart. Desire and reason. ._.

Great job. Love it.
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