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Fire Dance

Posted: 29 May 2015, 00:02
by Fooxie Darkbloom
Red, Orange, Yellow, Blue
Twisting
dancing
reaching up high
grasping at the air
eating everything at their feet
moving freely
out of control
leaving destruction behind
Red, Orange, Yellow, Blue

Re: Fire Dance

Posted: 29 May 2015, 05:03
by DATo
Very nice poem, as are the others you submitted! I particularly like this one. It evokes images of Mardi Gras or Bacchanalian festivity despite the destructive nature of the dancers.

Re: Fire Dance

Posted: 29 May 2015, 14:05
by Fooxie Darkbloom
thank you :) The dancers are flames ;)