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You are gone
Posted: 04 Apr 2024, 13:23
by Nisha DSouza
I think of you all the time
And miss your gentle smile
I turn around to see you
But you are gone.
I wish I could have said goodbye
I wish I could have loved you more
I wish my heart stopped crying
I wish God let you stay some more.
There are so many things I wish I had done
And so many things I wish I hadn't said
So much hurt that I wish to take back
But you are gone.
Even though you are not here
You will always be in me
Because you gave me life Mom
And made me ME!
I will wait for the day we meet again
Smile at each other with love again
Hug and laugh remembering the days gone by
When we will be together again.
Re: You are gone
Posted: 04 Apr 2024, 14:06
by Silvia Sianto
I think of you every minute of my time
But you're gone too soon
I love you mom
Watch over me .
Re: You are gone
Posted: 07 Apr 2024, 23:54
by Sana Irfan Dar
I can feel the depth in writer's emotions.Feelings expressed through beautiful poetry!!
Re: You are gone
Posted: 11 Apr 2024, 00:52
by Nisha DSouza
Sana Irfan Dar wrote: ↑07 Apr 2024, 23:54
I can feel the depth in writer's emotions.Feelings expressed through beautiful poetry!!
Thank you, Sana. This is my first serious and thoughtful poetry.
Re: You are gone
Posted: 28 May 2024, 11:25
by Moddesser Elahi
Nisha DSouza wrote: ↑04 Apr 2024, 13:23
I think of you all the time
And miss your gentle smile
I turn around to see you
But you are gone.
I wish I could have said goodbye
I wish I could have loved you more
I wish my heart stopped crying
I wish God let you stay some more.
There are so many things I wish I had done
And so many things I wish I hadn't said
So much hurt that I wish to take back
But you are gone.
Even though you are not here
You will always be in me
Because you gave me life Mom
And made me ME!
I will wait for the day we meet again
Smile at each other with love again
Hug and laugh remembering the days gone by
When we will be together again.
I am not really sure if I should ask this! Is this poem talking about someone's actual life-experience?
Re: You are gone
Posted: 28 May 2024, 15:06
by Nisha DSouza
Moddesser Elahi wrote: ↑28 May 2024, 11:25
I am not really sure if I should ask this! Is this poem talking about someone's actual life-experience?
Hi
@Moddesser Elahi,
Yes, it is a poem I wrote in memory of my mom who passed away in September last year.
Re: You are gone
Posted: 28 May 2024, 20:37
by Charmaine Mahlangu
This is sad. I wonder how you guys finish these genres and books. I would tear up every other page flipped. The writer really wanted you to feel the loss of a loved one and that's a good thing because we can all relate to it.
