A question to Moon: How does it feel?

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Arneet k
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A question to Moon: How does it feel?

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A question to Moon: How does it feel?

Today, I saw the full moon...
I asked him a question...
Today, when you are complete...
whole...
full...
shining at your best...
How does it feel???
He replied...
Nothing special...
I am always complete, whole, full...
at my best...
It's just a pity...
that you can see it only once in a month...
Now you tell me...
how does you feel...
After seeing me complete, whole and full...
seeing my best...
Do you feel a spark inside yourself...
That one day...
You too will be complete, whole and full...
shining at your best...
Do you feel it?
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Sharon Nyaga
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Post by Sharon Nyaga »

What made me read the short story is about the moon i mean who doesn't want to know how the moon looks like. I love the way they are expressing themselves. The way he is giving the other subject hope when he tells him" you too will be complete, whole and full shinning at your best". It feel great when reading it and you will learn a lot.
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