"A Broken Heart"

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Hilda Whitter
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"A Broken Heart"

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Running waters
Flowing down
Drifting to
A lonely place

A broken heart
Is what I have
I pray for strength
At love's command
For love is the cure
I await
I endure

Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times
Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times

Rushing waters
Wipe me clean
Clean my heart
Comfort me

Release me
From the pain
Take me now
Clear my name

Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times
Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times

Alone
I face my quest
To reach
For love nothing
Less

Rescue me
Sending love
Spread my wings
Soar above

Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times
Oh love on my mind
Wipe the tears
Through these times
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Barar Zaki
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Whoever wrote this poem wrote an authentic poem at last. Nobody can give you love like your self.
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