Short Poem

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bibliobibulii
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Short Poem

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So I got this notification, a mail actually that I can post my poems here. I'm not a poet like really not but I always felt that I could write something and maybe post somewhere, yk not to be seen but just to show. Here's one- no proof check, completely raw and vulnerable-

waiting for you is like waiting for a sunset
when you come,
it's so bright, so colorful.
when you leave,
it's so unlighted, so cold.
waiting for you is like waiting for a cool breeze,
when you come,
it's so soothing, so lull,
when you leave,
it's only muggy, it's always dull.
waiting for you is like waiting for a plant to grow
when you come,
it's so reviving, so leafy.
when you leave,
I'll always wait for you, I'll always be greedy.
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