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This is the place for readers of poetry. Discuss poetry and literary art. You can also discuss music here, including lyrics. Also, you can discuss poets themselves, in addition to poetry.
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groove
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Post by groove »

Thrust upwards and against
Swirling vortexes unite and disappear
In a clash of directions.

Descent through gravity
In haphazard motions
Checked by the breeze
For a moment
Thrust upwards and against.
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andr70
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Post by andr70 »

That's just overwhelmed with emotions, really touching one I would say
thanks
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henrinaiara
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Post by henrinaiara »

really touching indeed.. standing applause for the writer
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