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Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 08 Apr 2019, 03:06
by Livingstone Ochieng
Life is like a piece of art,
it requires heart.
Choose your paint and brush,
take your heart and avoid the rush.

Before you paint, choose your theme,
and don’t be afraid to follow your dream.
It’s alright to make a mistake,
cause our paint is real, it’s not fake.

Look at your paint, don’t be crying,
begin again, keep on trying.
Your painting is never fully complete,
enjoy the process to make it sweet.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 09 Apr 2019, 11:06
by Mslenadenise
And i can relate, because I'm an artist. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 10 Apr 2019, 04:29
by Livingstone Ochieng
Mslenadenise wrote: 09 Apr 2019, 11:06 And i can relate, because I'm an artist. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Good to hear from you Mslenadenise, thanks I appreciate the compliment.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 10 Apr 2019, 07:20
by Nisha Ward
Oh, I like this. A lot of other poems I've seen with this theme don't cover the bit about trying again, so I especially appreciated that bit.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 10 Apr 2019, 11:33
by Hayley2-0
Aaaw thankyou so much for writing this beautiful poem it has inspired me to go for my dreams and not doubt myself

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 10 Apr 2019, 14:12
by Livingstone Ochieng
Hayley2-0 wrote: 10 Apr 2019, 11:33 Aaaw thankyou so much for writing this beautiful poem it has inspired me to go for my dreams and not doubt myself
I do not take the credit for writing the poem though, it was shared with me by a friend and I decided to share as well. It's a real inspiration.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 20 Apr 2019, 06:57
by CharlizeGwapa
Excellent poetry, good choice of words.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 28 Apr 2019, 03:01
by juliusotieno02
The strength of words in this piece inspires and unleashes the potential in us. Thanks for this.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 30 Apr 2019, 00:45
by Livingstone Ochieng
juliusotieno02 wrote: 28 Apr 2019, 03:01 The strength of words in this piece inspires and unleashes the potential in us. Thanks for this.
Thanks for this feedback.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 06 May 2019, 14:39
by FariDa Arif
Life is indeed a piece of art,as it is full of colours,music and feelings.Diversity and creativity is there,so is arts.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 07 May 2019, 01:56
by Livingstone Ochieng
FariDa Arif wrote: 06 May 2019, 14:39 Life is indeed a piece of art,as it is full of colours,music and feelings.Diversity and creativity is there,so is arts.
Thanks FariDa, for bringing a different perspective to the piece.

Re: Life, A Piece Art.

Posted: 17 May 2019, 23:48
by imSunshine
So inspiring poem..I love it, very true to life