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Disappointment
Posted: 28 Dec 2016, 21:45
by Aohanlon86
There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 31 Mar 2017, 14:30
by Christina O Phillips
Such a terrible feeling
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 07 May 2017, 20:29
by Ninetimes
Sighs...oh my
-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --
Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 09 May 2017, 15:55
by Jaime Lync
This poem is so sad. I think when you see disappointment in the eyes of a loved one - that hurts.
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 28 Jul 2017, 03:53
by Ama Idim
Sad...
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 12 Aug 2017, 03:49
by geoffrey ngoima
That's a feeling to struggle with
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 11 Jun 2018, 17:42
by palilogy
There are very strong feelings behind this poem which compels the reader with tone.
I want to know more specifics - poems don't always have to be so poetic - they can have details =)
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 15 Jun 2018, 00:44
by Ayyatullah
So Sad
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 18 Jun 2018, 08:00
by jake_basit995
feels like rowing the boat with a thin stick in the middle of harsh storms. Disappointments are like waves
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 18 Jun 2018, 18:19
by Lizbeth2
Yeah disappointment comes and time and trust me that feeling is terrible
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 19 May 2019, 08:29
by imSunshine
Very sad poem..disappointment is a very lonely thing..
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 06 Nov 2020, 17:37
by emidio125
Very sad poem
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 07 Nov 2020, 08:34
by Neppi_reads
Amcdanel86 wrote: ↑28 Dec 2016, 21:45
There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
Such sad poem! However love your choice of words and how you've ended the poem nicely! Awesome job.
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 12 Nov 2020, 17:40
by Eriny Youssef
Felt that, unfortunate feeling.
Keep writing
Re: Disappointment
Posted: 13 Mar 2021, 12:31
by D reviewer
Ninetimes wrote: ↑07 May 2017, 20:29
Sighs...oh my
-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --
Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!
This is so cool. Well done
