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So its raining "elephants and hippos". I decided to take a warm shower before bed. I stared out the window at the rain-filled sky as the warm water caressed my body, enveloping me in warmth. I listened silently to the sound of the rain as it fell on the roof top.
Slowly the noise faded and all I could hear was the sweet lullaby mother nature sings to her beloved.
I fell in love with the melody, with the rain.
On a cold cold night just like today, take a warm shower, slowly let yourself go and listen silently. U might be lucky enough to hear her sing.

Lovely

I love the imagery. It's currently raining right outside my window, and this poem fit the mood so well.

Yes great imagery A very good piece of work capturing the feeling

I think this really let's you feel a rainy day and what like.

A beautiful ode to rain, it evoked all the sensations of a cold rainy night. I enjoyed it!

Great use of imagery! Thank you for sharing with us. I love you saying "hippos and elephants" because where I'm from we say "cats and dogs" when referring to heavy rain. I love your description so much!

It's so beautiful that you had this thought and decided to share it with us! Thank you so much!

Good idea you got

You give me more reason to like the rain.
Short poem but I can feel the how you love and appreciate mother earth.❤

Rain is a natyural comforter..thanks for sharing a good piece of poetry.

The imagery was amazing. Love it.

This is beautiful! Simple, sweet, and with wonderful imagery. I always love the personification of Mother Earth. Rain is a lovely thing, and I like your connection of natural rain with human showers. Thanks for sharing!

that is ingenious of you..congratulations, dude lol