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From the weak poet

Posted: 14 Jan 2019, 21:18
by Ma-Gonzalez
Do you feel when he called you
Some say he was innocent
Called from the heavens
And screamed the amour
From the skies to hell
He is the innocent king
Beloved by everybody
But without respect
Except if you respect death
vengeance or suicide.

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 04 Mar 2019, 12:10
by Crazyreader01
Wow, that's deep.

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 06 Mar 2019, 10:25
by elizaron878
Why only a full stop at the end?

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 19 Mar 2019, 03:48
by nooregano
Thank you so much for choosing to share this with us! :D

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 25 Mar 2019, 10:48
by IamShing
why so sad?

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 03 May 2019, 20:44
by Kelsey Hatch
I really like this! There are a lot of different people I picture while reading. Keep up the good work!

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 18 May 2019, 00:25
by imSunshine
very creative of you..i am impressed

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 18 May 2019, 10:41
by Je1627
It’s a nice piece of poetry, but why the different tenses? Is it to add some kid of mood or a simple error?

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 18 May 2019, 22:03
by imSunshine
nooregano wrote: 19 Mar 2019, 03:48 Thank you so much for choosing to share this with us! :D
It is a nice piece, right?

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 11 Dec 2021, 06:14
by Avishi
Unique title. Nice poem .I loved it. 👌

Re: From the weak poet

Posted: 15 Dec 2021, 12:23
by Anthonio042
This was a well-written piece. The whole quality of this poetry exudes genuineness. Simple language were chosen that the audience could understand. You performed a fantastic job, and I wish you grow and prosper more.