Official Review: The time we have by aastha madhur
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Re: Official Review: The time we have by aastha madhur

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Very few things ruin a book like stilted, unnatural dialogue. It sounds as if this author gets it right! Thanks for such a thorough review!I loved the casual way the author built the conversations and the relationship between the two main characters. Their words flowed effortlessly, and I found myself immersed in their witty and thought-provoking dialog.


You can spend your time however you want, but you can spend it only once.

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They did have great chemistry and they shared the same philosophies. Hope you do get the chance to read this one. Thanks so much for commenting!
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Yes, the author definitely got it right. Thanks so much, Sarah, for reading my review and commenting!sarahmarlowe wrote: ↑17 Jun 2019, 12:00Very few things ruin a book like stilted, unnatural dialogue. It sounds as if this author gets it right! Thanks for such a thorough review!I loved the casual way the author built the conversations and the relationship between the two main characters. Their words flowed effortlessly, and I found myself immersed in their witty and thought-provoking dialog.![]()
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I think another round of editing would make for a stellar novel. It reminded me of Nicholas Sparks' type of story. Thank you, Prisallen, for reading and for your comments!

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I hope that she gets the errors corrected also, so the book gets the credit that it deserves. Thank you so much, Hannah, for reading my review and for your comments.hannahbhill33 wrote: ↑18 Jun 2019, 23:52 I enjoyed reading your review and it has peaked my interest in reading this story. I will be adding it to my bookshelf. I am glad to see that the editing mistake won't take to much away from the reading itself, though I do wish that the author would have gotten it professionally edited to make sure it had all the effort involved to help a great story.
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Definitely a poignant romance. Thank you, Nisha, for reading my review and for commenting!Nisha Ward wrote: ↑21 Jun 2019, 01:46 Lea seems like she's had a tough life, so it's nice that she finds something in Matt. Unfortunately that's not enough to get me to tead what sounds like a poignant romance. Thanks for the review.
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It was a book I did not want to end. Thank you, Magnify3, for your comments!
