Official Review: From What's Broken by R.M. Demeester
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Official Review: From What's Broken by R.M. Demeester

3 out of 4 stars
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Losing a loved one is hard; losing a child while another one is on the way is unimaginable. Before the loss of their daughter, Ivory, Matthew and Amanda are your typical happy married couple. The pair are expecting another daughter to add to their already perfect family. This happiness shatters once Ivory dies, leaving both parties feeling that the other is to blame. Overtime, their marriage disintegrates, and they go their separate ways. Matthew rekindles a romance with his ex-fiancée, Rebecca, and Amanda begins a sexual relationship with her boss, Roger. On paper, they seem to have moved on. However, feelings and history, both good and bad, can’t evaporate overnight. R.M. Demeester’s From What’s Broken explores the tragedy of the death of a child and how it can forever change a family. The book keeps you wondering if Amanda and Matthew can ever recover and what their futures hold.
Demeester artfully depicts the myriad of emotions Matthew and Amanda experience following the loss of their daughter. I really enjoyed how the author broke the book into parts dedicated to each character. This allowed for me to connect with them and see their unique situations. Through Amanda’s eyes, she views Matthew as being indifferent toward Joy, his newborn daughter, and happy with his new living situation. Once we shift to Matthew’s perspective, we realize that Matthew is hurting just as much as Amanda. I also appreciated the depth Demeester added to Rebecca. While she was vindictive toward Amanda, this behavior was understandable. Years ago, Matthew was engaged to Rebecca, but left her to start a relationship with Amanda. This triggers a sense of insecurity that plagues Rebecca for the rest of the novel.
The only area for improvement that I can think of deals with the beginning of the book. Demeester dives right into the aftermath of Ivory’s death and the destruction of Matthew and Amanda’s marriage. While the author does allude to life before these tragedies using flashbacks and musings of the characters, I feel that more could have been done. To add impact to these events, the novel should start by describing their family before the loss of Ivory. This allows for readers to connect with the family more and feel more heart-broken when its imminent destruction arrives.
Unfortunately, From What’s Broken contained grammatical errors. The most common mistakes involved missing commas and incorrect word usage. For instance, one error included the use of “then” instead of “than.” While none of these were severe enough to seriously take away from my enjoyment of the novel, they do indicate that it would benefit from another round of editing.
Considering all of this, I rate From What’s Broken 3 out of 4 stars. While I would love to rate this book higher due to the author’s heart-wrenching depiction of loss, the presence of errors prevents me from doing so. I would recommend the novel to readers who have experienced the loss of a loved one. Demeester does a wonderful job of depicting the numerous emotions a person may experience after such an event, making the book an appropriate read for this group. At the same time, those who recently dealt with this kind of tragedy may feel that the subject is too raw for them.
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