Official Review: The Sound of Spring by G.X. Chen
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Re: Official Review: The Sound of Spring by G.X. Chen
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A professional must have edited the book, as I only found two grammatical errors. Despite this fact and that Chen’s writing is sophisticated, I did not enjoy some elements of the book. Chen overuses exclamation marks and ellipses. These writing techniques made the novella overly dramatic for my taste. I thought that Chun Ming expressed herself too eloquently for having a sixth-grade level education. And, I prefer when an author shows rather than tells. This story is told from Chun Ming’s point of view, and she mostly tells all that happens. At times, I thought the narration sounded like a memoir.
These are all very valid points that could be improved. Hopefully, the author will take into consideration constructive criticism like yours for his future work.
However, this seems like a nice novel, not only a swoony romance but an engaging way to learn about a different time period and culture.
Thanks!
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