Official Review: The Unforgettable Miss Baldwin

MarisaRose · Post by **MarisaRose** » 10 Oct 2019, 07:32

[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "The Unforgettable Miss Baldwin" by Gail Ingis.]

3 out of 4 stars

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The Unforgettable Miss Baldwin (Gilded Age Heiresses Book 1), by Gail Ingis, centers on Allie Baldwin, a young woman from a wealthy New York family who is dedicating her life to improving women's rights, particularly their right to vote. Allie’s father owns a paper, and she is lucky enough to work as one of his journalists. Though Mr. Baldwin would prefer Allie write society pieces, her goal is to push boundaries and create more meaningful articles about the important political movement going on around her. Unfortunately, not all of Allie’s readers are happy with the focus of her nontraditional writing. As Allie works to learn more about the importance of women earning the vote, her father hires Peter, a handsome security agent, as Allie’s protector. Although Allie is steadfast in her political ideas, she can’t help but be taken with Peter’s dashing good looks.

This book is well written, and Ingis shows a knack for writing historical fiction. Most notably, the author’s descriptions and use of dialogue create an immersive setting by staying true to the time period. Details about garments, food, and New York City help transport the reader to the past in a fluid manner, without taking away from the storytelling. Further, the conversations between Allie and her family, and Allie and Peter, were appropriate given the societal rules of the period. Additionally, the narrative was mostly error free.

Throughout the novel, there is a mystery about the identity of a person sending threatening letters and packages to Allie. The content of the mysterious mail makes it clear Allie is being targeted for her forward-thinking articles. The use of an overarching plot created intrigue and aided the story’s pacing. The author also included a couple of enjoyable peripheral characters that added an entertaining touch to the narrative: Captyn, Allie’s Great Dane, and Mia, Allie’s sister, accompany Allie and Peter on multiple adventures. The two characters provide a humorous break from the on-going tension between Allie and Peter.

However, Allie’s character proved tiresome at times. Her enthusiasm about women’s suffrage, though commendable, wasn’t wholly believable. Allie comes from a wealthy family and has a revolutionary job, considering the time period. Though her career adds to her persona as a strong-willed woman wanting to create change, Allie never encounters trying experiences or intrinsic hardships that would strengthen her convictions and show the reader why she feels so strongly about the movement. The character comes across as a privileged young woman who has made women’s suffrage her hobby. Further, Allie gets out of sticky situations easily; her family goes along with Allie's ideas even though they may not fully agree; and Allie's inner struggle regarding the handsome Peter and the idea of marriage is resolved too easily. By the end of the novel, it is clear Allie isn’t truly willing to break out of the role society deems fit for her.

Although this novel doesn’t work as an in-depth look at women’s suffrage or as an accurate portrayal of a woman fighting for her ideals, the book succeeds as a casual read: the plotting and historical setting are engaging, and the pacing is enjoyable. Readers will enjoy this book if they are looking for a light read that's well written, has a touch of romance, and focuses on a strong-willed female protagonist. Since I enjoyed the overall plot arc of this story and found merit in the writing, The Unforgettable Miss Baldwin earns 3 out of 4 stars. If Allie was a more in-depth character, I would have considered a higher rating.

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Post by **Adina Lutinger** » 23 Oct 2019, 02:59

This seemed like a flawless book at first, but the lack of challenges and character development for Allie is a serious con for me. However, this still sounds like a book I would love to read. Thank you very much for your wonderful review.

Wyland · Post by **Wyland** » 23 Oct 2019, 05:06

This is quite interesting and commendable for a rich lady to wish to write on women rights. But as usual love threatens to spoil for her. I hope to read the novel. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Dentarthurdent · Post by **Dentarthurdent** » 23 Oct 2019, 08:07

The premise of the book is quite fresh, so it's such a shame that ultimately, it did not reach its potential. The lack of challenges is particularly disappointing.
Thanks for the detailed review!

Post by **Madiha_** » 23 Oct 2019, 11:48

Just by reading this review I want to read the book, it draws my attention the fact that a woman works in a newspaper and reinvindicates women's rights in that period. It is definitely an intriguing review.

kdstrack · Post by **kdstrack** » 02 Nov 2019, 10:14

This does end up seeming more like a romance with Allie falling for "Peter's dashing good looks." I like the fact that the author has mixed in a mystery and also some enjoyable characters. Great review.

Nisha Ward · Post by **Nisha Ward** » 05 Nov 2019, 11:19

It's weird that Allie isn't more believable, considering she is the main character, but I guess some sacrifices have to be made for this setup to work as well as it does? I can definitely see the romance and the mystery going well in hand here though.

spluficvictory · Post by **spluficvictory** » 06 Nov 2019, 01:48

I would appreciate it if Allie didn't come from a wealthy family, that way the challenges would make her character more believable. Thanks for the wonderful review

Maríe Wamakima · Post by **Maríe Wamakima** » 28 Nov 2019, 03:01

I found the title humorous mostly because of the character's surname. However your review is quite extensive and it makes it quite clear that this book is not for me. Thank you for your review!