What did you think of how this book constantly switched between the "present" action of the missions and flashbacks?
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What did you think of how this book constantly switched between the "present" action of the missions and flashbacks?
Personally, though, I think Uliel pulled it off brilliantly. The flashbacks either related to some epiphany learned on the mission, or worked as foreshadowing.
What are your thoughts? Were you able to follow the action despite the constant jumping back and forth? Did you think it was effective or confusing?
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I agree, and that takes a lot of skill as a writer. It would be easy to get lost, but he handled it very well and I was as interested in one story arc, as in the other.
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I agree with you. The flashbacks actually augmented the missions. He really wove the seamlessly together.unamilagra wrote: ↑04 Jan 2020, 18:46 I loved the flashbacks. I think that sometimes when authors try to write that way it becomes very choppy or confusing, but I think his transitions were very smooth and also made me more interested in both storylines. I feel like it would have been much more boring if they had been separated out.
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As to the reason why he does it or what he achieves by using this method, I believe it enriches the reading experience. A steady, chronological account of the trips, like a log, would have been somewhat boring.
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The flashbacks really added to the story, didn't they? They helped to "flesh out" the characters.
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That's a really good point. We wouldn't have felt the same connection to the characters without the rich back story the flashbacks provided. Thanks for sharing!KitabuKizuri wrote: ↑05 Jan 2020, 01:43 I think the flashbacks also made the characters more relatable, showing how their relationships built up over the years as well as showing the effects of having family support (or lack of which) and strong friendship bonds, among other themes.
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This is true. Hadn't thought of that, but you're right. I'm amazed at how well he does it. Thanks for sharing!aacodreanu wrote: ↑05 Jan 2020, 02:05 Referring strictly to the "how", I believe that the author does it very smoothly, the reader does not have any difficulty in following the thread of the action.
As to the reason why he does it or what he achieves by using this method, I believe it enriches the reading experience. A steady, chronological account of the trips, like a log, would have been somewhat boring.
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It really rounds out our understanding of the men, doesn't it?
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