Do You Love Me?

[Saniya Mansuri]

"Making up for everything that this world lacks
The heart inside you is frantic when it asks"
Best line ever.
Moved by the simplicity of the words
Good work

[naoxlp]

This poem is so well written expressingboth fear and joy of love the way it is described expresses exacly how intenses those feelings are. There's so many things to say about ourselves to our significant other to let them be able to actually know us and understand us it can be good and bad something we have done or have got done to nd it takes lots of couraage and trust to open up about these things and thats why when it comes to a relatonship you are full of questions because youare worried that yourpartner wont love you and that poem has described everything in such a simple yet beautiful way Bravo

[Alexandur Gicov]

Congratulations, great work, continue in the same spirit with such a great poetic word.

[Tori_J]

That is a good one. I like it. I would like to see more like this one from you. thanks for posting it.

[Avishi]

Your poem deserve to become a song lyrics. Really it was intriguing and calm. Great poem

[jp2150rox]

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. I feel it heart and soul.

[Inge van Tonder]

Great job! Catchy and interesting!

[Kidd Essence]

Great Poem.

[Hussein21]

I love this book. This how's that not only girls can be emotionally addicted to a relationship and not only girls get heartbroken

[Owuamanam Eberechukwu]

Do You Love Me?

Lift the veil from your face
Wipe the tears from your eyes
Break down the walls in the place
Where your beauty hides
Take my hand in yours
Baby, don’t be afraid
Unlock all the doors
To your lonely heart betrayed

I know the girl you hide beneath the masks
She can’t look me in the eye when she asks

Do you love me for all of my fears?
Do you love me when I break down in tears?
Do you love me with my insecurities?
Do you love me if I can no longer please?
Do you love me though I am a liar?
Do you love me and my angry fire?
Do you love me as I fall apart?
Do you love me now with all your heart?

So much love to give
But you just can’t accept
There’s only one life to live
Without much to be kept
Sometimes it’s hard to comprehend
Life is so short and unknown
Baby, be my friend
Don’t choose to be alone

Making up for everything that this world lacks
The heart inside you is frantic when it asks

Do you love me when I push you away?
Do you love me through the disarray?
Do you love me if I get confused?
Do you love me though I’ve been abused?
Do you love me as I come undone?
Do you love me when I am no fun?
Do you love me when I don’t feel smart?
Do you love me now with all your heart?

You walked me to my car
The night I came to your place
Your smile sparkled like a star
As you fell into my embrace
We enjoyed the night together
In each other’s company
I knew that night would last forever
In my happy memory

So let me be the one to give you all the facts
My heart is so alive with joy when it asks

Do I love you? More than you can know
Do I love you? Above and below
Do I love you? For everything you are
Do I love you? Both near and far
Do I love you? More than happiness
Do I love you? With all that I possess
Do I love you? Like a work of art
Do I love you now? With all my heart

Do I love you? With passionate flair
Do I love you? No one can compare
Do I love you? For all that you’re not
Do I love you? Oh, have you forgot?
Do I love you? With every breath
Do I love you? Baby, until death
Do I love you? Since the very start
Do I love you now? With all my heart

Do you love me? Yes, I do
Do you love me? Yes, I do
Do you love me? Yes, I do
Do you love me? Yes, I do

Beautiful poem. But I don’t love you good effort anyway.

[Brunette2]

An amazing poem, I like your poetry skills keep it up