You Who Longed For My Destruction

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thisgirl818
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You Who Longed For My Destruction

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Dear unnamed witless harlot
I loathe you to the core
How dingy is your heart
To downplay my hopeful life
My daunting heart is aflame
Such audacity you display
To undermine me
And push your worthless pathetic
Totally incoherent lover to the top
I pity how many brain cells
Had died to your every astounding thoughts
Such lavish life you have
But such much foul heart you grow
Such desire you have to be
The Star Barricade of my so called life
I beseech you
To start to avail oneself of a rational brain
And that realizing self justice
Is nothing but a devious mask
Of your selfish, filthy, bastard heart

You who longed for my destruction
Shall seek a bitter end
Priscilla Anderson 2
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Post by Priscilla Anderson 2 »

I think the poem was good and the choice of words were good but too harsh for me. I understand that the poet was also against the opponent but I think some of the words were harsh as it will be read my many people out there
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