LIFE

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Ishika Sharma 10
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LIFE

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It's all like a train.
Trains keeps moving and life goes on.
Crossing various stages like those stations.
People coming in and moving out.
Some travel for a short time and others throughout without a doubt.
But do you know what is the truth?
No one will remain till the end of the route.
It's we who choose neither the beginning nor the end but to travel.
Some provide us with joy ,the other with pain, as everybody has a role to play.
Rides may be full of joy, sorrow, fantasy, expectations, hellos and goodbyes.
But remember,
No one is blessed with the best fortune or worst luck,
At the end what you decide to take is what matters.
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This is perfectly true. But let me ask, I have been at the same area I used to be. For over many years now. But mentally I'm not. Nobody can actually convince of something which isn't in it nature. You post is really an inspiration @I@Ishika Sharma 10
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Post by Ishika Sharma 10 »

@bararzaki Ahmed I completely understand what you mean—sometimes, our external circumstances don’t reflect our internal journeys. It’s important to acknowledge those shifts and feelings. Remember, even in times of stagnation, there’s always potential for growth and change within us.
If you're feeling stuck, maybe it’s a good time to explore new interests or experiences that spark your passion and creativity. Life is full of possibilities, and sometimes a small step can lead to a big transformation. I'm glad my post inspired you.
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