Lost in the moonlight

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Emmanuel Ojiako
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Lost in the moonlight

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Silvery beams upon my face
A lonely night, a peaceful space
The world is hushed, a quiet sleep
As moonlight whispers secrets deep

Shadows dance upon the wall
A midnight serenade, a lonely call
The moon's pale light, a guiding ray
Leads me through life's uncertain way
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That sounds pretty good. It has a nice flow to it describing a clear night sky on a Full Moon. Those are so beautiful. It’s amazing how much light the moon can give out on any given night when it’s available.
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