Did You Take Classes?
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Did You Take Classes?
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I got into it - WAY into it - was self published in highschool and have been hooked ever since. It's just such a release for me and found it to be easy - then again, some people are good at physics. I'm just good at writing. (Self proclaimed, of course)

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I am also looking for an agent to represent me but as I write in a variety of genres, that has been rather difficult. Most agents want an author who does one thing and does it well. I feel that as long as the author does well, even in a variety of genres, they should get the chance to be represented.
The following poem was written when I was fifteen years old. Let me know what you think of it please.
A Love To Call My Own
I knew from the beginning,
That you were just a flirt;
Yet I fell in love with you,
Knowing I'd be hurt.
I thought I could tie you down,
And make you love just one;
But how could I do something,
No-one else had ever done.
I know you never loved me,
And I'm trying not to cry;
For I must find the strength somehow,
To kiss your lips good-bye.
When you ask for me again,
You'll find I won't be there;
I want a love to call my own,
Not one I'll have to share.
So I will hide my broken heart,
Beneath a laughing face;
And though you'll think I never cared,
No-one else can take your place.
Copyright ?1977 Mickey L. Stroda
- DuchessAngel37
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And I had a hard time with the short story section sometimes. Usually the assignment was something like 'pay attention to setting' or something lile that, and setting is never that important to me. I tell a lot of my stories through dialogue (I have been doing some experimenting with long descriptive passages and minimal talking though), and everything I wrote came out that way, so I the instructor and I butted heads constantly. I said the same thing over and over, "You can't force someone's creativity to go a certain way."
However, classes that were at like the library or something, those were a little better. At least there was no grades involved, and you were getting the opinions of other people who were there to enjoy it.
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Then again "published poets" can be incredibly patronising, like their workshops are more "lets get these kids into this thing called po-et-ry" rather than giving any actually useful information.
Iv applied and been accepted to do english, creative writing and practice at lancaster uni next year, so Im hoping a real course will help more

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After you get through asking yourself the basic question of what this poem is about, you begin to break the poem down by asking yourself a couple of other question which will help you understand the poem more and, equally as important, understand why this poem works on both a literal and figurative level. What are these things which helps unravel this Christmas gift? There are things such as tone which helps create the mood. Metaphor and Simile creates a richness quality that every poem needs. Sometimes you get hyperbole based on who the poem is directed to. You get meter and rhyme poems vs. non-metrical and free-verse poem; all these things creates a certain
I learn how to look at a poem to see what is the poet doing on the page, what techniques and devices is he or she doing that makes this poem successful and part of the literary cannon. Is he using one main metaphor of a bunch of different metaphors? Is the tone in the poem light-heard, or, better yet, is it dark and bitter? How does the language shape the poem? If the poem rhymes (and not all poems do), does it help itself with this technique, or does it make it too sing- songy. Further, there are other techniques used that helps a reader understand why this poem is good.
On writing poetry/workshops:
It all depends on the class. I believe workshops does have merit whereby you do attain good information from both your fellow students and the actual instructor, a publish poet. At the university that I attended for the last two years, I had a fabulous teacher that gave me a lot of honest and critical feedback on my work. She explained to me what worked and what didn?t work in the poem. I do not believe a poet who teaches these workshops are tying to turn the students into ?poets? or geared them towards this field. Rather, they want students to become better overall writers and they want students to understand what makes a good poem from a bad one.
Getting back to the students:
I think in these workshops the majority of the kids don?t know how to read a poem for whatever reason. I believe kids have had a bad experience in High School where teachers either taught them the wrong way to approach poetry, or, simply put, teacher in HS forced poems down the throat of kids that was boring, blunder, and, generally speaking, too difficult to unravel. Kids do not understand poetry from the enlightenment or the romantic air. Thus, they do not care. We live in a media driven society where everything happens in a split second. Kids need to have poems, or at least a survey of poems that speaks to this generation? Confessional School, Beats, New York School, and some of the metaphysical experimental poets would unravel the brains of these kids in HS.
Other reasons why I enjoy poetry workshops:
My teacher taught me a good number of traditional styles versus free-verse. We had ten poems do throughout the quarter, 3-4 rewrites, and two different journals due at the halfway work.
What were some of the styles?
Villanelle, Sestina, Couplets, Sonnet, Audabe, Ode, Quatrain, Ghazal, Anaphora/Listing/Repetition, Metaphor poem, Metrical poem, Blank Verse, and other poems as well.
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I don't usually write sad poems, but I think I have written poems to make people think about more serious things in life, such as: Slavery. I sometimes have shown children how you can "mirror" a poem or "shadow" one, and one of these funny poems is called Brave, Brave Sledderclob - which is a take-off of Jabberwocky by Lewis Carroll. I write from funny or nonsense poems, to beautifully descriptive poems of the natural world. If anyone can tell me how I write them I'd like to know, but I couldn't imagine going to a writing class because I don't think another person can tell someone how to write. You either do it or you don't.
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There is a big difference between creatively writing prose and creatively writing poetry, and they should be separated and taught in a different way. I go into schools and meet teachers and children. Children have to learn even from their first year at school what rhyme is, and to clap their hands for rhythm. I hope that gone are the days when you just read someone else's poem and were asked: "What was Wordsworth referring to here?" or "How does Keats respond to the nightingale?" - or perhaps, after reading one of my poems: "Behind these words, could there be a hidden meaning?" - because the answer would usually be "No". If I have a message to put over, I like to put mine over clearly. These questions, in a classroom, iare what turn students off poetry for life.
It would be interesting to hear what others have to say about this. In the meantime I shall continue reading my book and also writing poetry but without someone telling me the subject and giving me 20 minutes in which to write. ha ha Josie Whitehead
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Yes I did take literature classes in high school. We had a mean teacher with a sagging lips. I loved her though
Tracee Ellis Ross