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I just finished reading the book and I'm going to commend the authors on the the character of Nadia. She's the most perfect character in the book.

My question is this, WHY WOULD ELIAS SEARCH EVERYWHERE FOR MALIKA AND EVENTUALLY WHEN HE FOUND HER, THEY DEPARTED SO ABRUPTLY?

You told a perfect story but almost drowned it in Adele's lyrics, I don't like that.

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Ayosinmi wrote:I just finished reading the book and I'm going to commend the authors on the the character of Nadia. She's the most perfect character in the book.

My question is this, WHY WOULD ELIAS SEARCH EVERYWHERE FOR MALIKA AND EVENTUALLY WHEN HE FOUND HER, THEY DEPARTED SO ABRUPTLY?

You told a perfect story but almost drowned it in Adele's lyrics, I don't like that.

Thumbs up to you. I'M GLAD I READ THE BOOK.
Thanks for your honest opinion, appreciated.
I agree that some people liked the concept of the lyrics and others didn't. We honestly felt it's different and it makes the concept of the concert more strong besides, what inspired us to write the whole book is a concert for Adele we have been to .

Regarding Elias, malika's story depecits how life changes us, and sometimes even if we reach our dreams and fulfill them... yet we lose something in return. In a journey of making your dream. You can't be back the same.
So when Elias met her, he saw an old mature Malik's who saw so much pain in the last eight years, this made her a different Malika. The innocence, naivety and passion she had in her heart was lost. She is older... Yaser's malika is not her. So he simply left.
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It's great actually. You could have used it in the titles only like you did and told matching stories, meanwhile, that was creative.
Whatever it is, I agree with the "Elias" concept. I identify with it even. We aspire for something with our whole essence and guess what, we achieve it and feel like 'was it really worth the effort?' meanwhile, in the quest for it, we would have let go of something important and worthwhile.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Kudos! Warm regards to your sibling.
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aialyaseer wrote:
Donnavila Marie01 wrote:I support you in your endeavor. I understand that writing is difficult if doesn't pay off. I experienced it once and I did not try it again. I hope to get the courage and inspiration to continue with my passion of writing. Do you still plan for your books in the future to be translated into English?
Definitely I will keep translating them to reach more audience.
I'm a director, so it's been always my dreams to adapt a book I wrote into a movie. I have vividly imagined how each scene from my trip to Adele will be directed. Let's hope it will
I enjoyed the trailer you made for this book. I brought me goose bumps. Thanks for the I answer. I will wait for the movie.
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I think it will make a good movie. Good luck!

What did you edit out of this book?
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gali wrote:I think it will make a good movie. Good luck!

What did you edit out of this book?
Nothing, but we added after the translation.
Malika's last dance was less than four sentences.
Yaser's kiss with Isabelle was less than a sentence.
Yaser's first sex call was way more shorter.
And other things, but those are the ones I remember
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Snowflake wrote:[*]SPOILER ALERT![/b][*]

I wasn't really sure if Malika was at peace at the end. I had a hard time interpreting her response to the concert and Elias. Was she moving to a place of peace?

Malika's last hysterical dance was an act of rebelling, it represented all the feelings the other three protagonists went through, if you read the last two pages again, the dance description is about all of them rather than just malika.

But to answer your question, was she at peace?
Well... do you think one could obtain peace

Thank you for your answers. I think people can move closer to peace as they gain wisdom and life experience. I was wondering if Malika was moving closer to or further away from peace.
peace starts with a smile...
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gali wrote:
aialyaseer wrote: I think it connects more people, the Moroccon culture is amazing, the Jordanian culture is ours so we know it perfectly, and the American culture has been always triggering people from all over the globe.
However, the main reason we chose those three stories because they are real stories of people we know very much, so it was easy for us to write because we had a reference.
It is based on real stories?? I wondered about that. I hope their story worked out better in reality.

Good luck with this book and the next ones! :tiphat:
Thanks.
Yes it's real stories but slightly different to fit the concept. Nadia's story is my sisters real story (the co-author RIAlyaseer)
Oh wow!! Out of all the characters I admired Nadi the most. I loved her determination and love for her son. Hats off to your sister :tiphat: :tiphat:
Can we expect a sequel of the book?
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Ssinghal wrote:
aialyaseer wrote:
gali wrote:
It is based on real stories?? I wondered about that. I hope their story worked out better in reality.

Good luck with this book and the next ones! :tiphat:
Thanks.
Yes it's real stories but slightly different to fit the concept. Nadia's story is my sisters real story (the co-author RIAlyaseer)
Oh wow!! Out of all the characters I admired Nadi the most. I loved her determination and love for her son. Hats off to your sister :tiphat: :tiphat:
Can we expect a sequel of the book?

No, although the translator suggested we make a sequel from the other point of views: Nadia's ex, Mariam and malika. I liked the idea, but no.
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Thank you for your answers. :)

What was your hardest scene to write?
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gali wrote:Thank you for your answers. :)

What was your hardest scene to write?
The whole last chapter, because we are moving from one character to another, hard in description and using the proper English tenses
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Thank you. Another question, if you don't mind. :)

How long did it take you to write the book?
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gali wrote:Thank you. Another question, if you don't mind. :)

How long did it take you to write the book?
About a month
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aialyaseer wrote:
gali wrote:Thank you. Another question, if you don't mind. :)

How long did it take you to write the book?
About a month
Wow, that was fast! :tiphat:
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Wow, love is something real, in eveyones mind the book is making love more rhytmic
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