Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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My least favorite part was the so-called romance aspect of the novel. I found it extremely cheesy and unsettling. I hated how both men in Cynthia's life treated her like a child.
I liked the cyber war aspect though. It was interesting to read about the subtle things that can be done to mess up websites.
I would recommend this book to others, but only if they like romance novels.
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My least favorite part was the so-called romance aspect of the novel. I found it extremely cheesy and unsettling. I hated how both men in Cynthia's life treated her like a child.
I liked the cyber war aspect though. It was interesting to read about the subtle things that can be done to mess up websites.
I would recommend this book to others, but only if they like romance novels.
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I agree with what you said about Sky! When they were talking about the major, and said his last name was scyler (maybe O spelled that wrong) I was like, oh maybe it's Sky! But then it didn't really seem like it could be him, based on the conflicting ways the characters were described.heatherashley7 wrote: ↑01 Jun 2019, 17:15 My overall opinion is very poor, I felt the flow of the book was choppy at best with two competing plot lines. I enjoyed the cyber war part of the book and found it interesting, but hard to follow. Cynthia's love life was poorly written and thrown in I think to give it more of an appeal, which it lacked.
The development of the characters were another issue for me as they were thoughtless. Sky was unbelievable at best, as he was supposed to be a major in the armed forces but reduced to nothing more than a stalker, and love sick schoolboy. These characteristics truly turned me off from the character. Dan was only introduced in a negative and stalking light with no clear ending which disturbed me as well. The author attempted to make Cynthia this independent woman, but at the same time ditzy and clueless.
If it weren't for the adult themes I would possibly recommend this for a teenager, but I would not recommend it to another adult.
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The book is quite intriguing. What I like most is the fight against terrorism and the drones too. What I like least is that the relationship was more between Cynthia and Sky, not Cynthia and Dan, which is not in concordance with the title. I'd recommend the book because it's an interesting read.gali wrote: ↑31 May 2019, 23:42 This is a discussion topic for the June 2019 Book of the Month, Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War by Dorothy May Mercer
What is your overall opinion of the book? What do you like most about it? What do you like least? Will you recommend the book to other people? Why or why not?
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I'd give it a 3 out of 4 stars because of the imperfection.
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Separating the sex scene as an 'at your own risk' chapter certainly disrupted the flow of the story, and it was like watching a boat on choppy waters, with fumbling text; 'she laid open her legs and went limp' is about the least erotic sentence I've ever seen in a sex scene.
The dialogue - "Daneeeeee noooooooo" - and all the howling and querying were super distracting. My MFA program always taught me if you need dialogue tags to show how your characters are feeling or behaving, you're not doing your job. Dialogue tags should be invisible, not something to focus the story around.
I'm going to keep plowing through this, but I don't think my rating will change substantially.