Hidden meaning of Love

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Flavian Olang
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Hidden meaning of Love

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    In whispers soft, where shadows play,
    Lies love's true heart, unseen by day.
    A silent dance of souls entwined,
    In realms where only hearts can find.

    It's in the glance that lingers long,
    A secret smile, a wordless song.
    In gentle touch that speaks of care,
    A hidden world, a lover's prayer.

    Beyond the spoken, love resides,
    In quiet moments, where it hides.
    An unmarked path, a subtle art,
    The hidden meaning, soul to heart.

    For love, unseen, is love that's pure,
    A sacred bond, a silent cure.
    In hearts it blooms, beyond the eye,
    A secret truth, where love doth lie.
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    Charmaine Mahlangu
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    Post by Charmaine Mahlangu »

    I've realised over the years that love is not only blind , it also makes you talk like a toddler. with this one at least it's not bad and the rhyme and rhythm is always useful to keep us entertained. Surprisingly I loved it . 😊I think I should try it at least once.
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    Oooo1
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    Post by Oooo1 »

    Loved it!
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    Post by Anureet kaur 11 »

    It’s written really well 😌the way you expressed it all. It felt hopeful and positive reading it
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