(Food For Thought) ''Interesting Discovery''

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Evans ka Benji
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(Food For Thought) ''Interesting Discovery''

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What I discovered in human relationships, is 'Somebody needs Somebody' at any point in time with all shape or form, in all regards. Their age, wealth, location and their status. Is not choice neither wants but is the necessity in human relationships. Somebody needs somebody for relationship, somebody needs somebody for support or an assistance.
Somebody likes somebody
Somebody loves somebody
Somebody hate somebody
Somebody wants somebody
Somebody likes selling; somebody likes buying
Somebody likes cooking; somebody likes eating
Somebody likes texting; somebody likes reading
Somebody likes writing; somebody likes watching
Somebody likes preaching; somebody likes drumming
Somebody likes clapping; somebody likes dancing
Somebody likes working; somebody likes sleeping
Somebody likes giving; somebody likes keeping
Somebody watching somebody; somebody seeing somebody
Somebody found somebody; somebody discovered somebody
Somebody knows somebody; somebody seen somebody
It all goes in circle, without me, without you nothing exists; without somebody and somebody nothing happens
somebody calls somebody; somebody texting somebody
Somebody respons to somebody; somebody ignores somebody
Somebody exploits somebody; somebody carried on somebody
Somebody contribute to somebody; somebody takers off somebody
Somebody teaches somebody; somebody learns from somebody
Somebody likes somebody, somebody keep an affair with somebody, somebody married to somebody while somebody divorced somebody
With many much more.
The ends justified the beginning as we all have common grounds being a human being.
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Actually LOVE is the highest vibration if I guess. And hatred can put you off your self, low into a black nightmare. We should all love ourselves.
A goal without a plan is just a wish :music-listening:
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Post by Dzillar Dannelle »

That's a profound and insightful observation about human relationships! You've beautifully highlighted the interconnectedness and interdependence of human beings, showcasing how we all need each other in various ways, regardless of age, wealth, location, or status.

Your conclusion that "without me, without you, nothing exists" and "without somebody and somebody, nothing happens" resonates deeply. It emphasizes the importance of recognizing our shared humanity and the significance of our relationships in shaping our experiences and lives.
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