This story is like no other. Conscience of a Dead Killer

Gary Delfino · Post by **Gary Delfino** » 24 Feb 2009, 14:00

My name is Gary Delfino.

Most murder mystery's pursue an evil person throughout the entire story and then predictably the killer is captured at the end.

Conscience of a Dead Killer is different... The killer is arrested, sentenced to death and killed in the electric chair in the first chapter.... Then, rather than good people chasing a bad guy, the bad guy is chasing himself. His ghost is forced to go back in time and witness his acts with a conscience. He actually falls in love with his first victim; this where the story begins: the killer's ghost finds a retired FBI agent who can see and hear him where no one else can. Together, they work to stop the living killer. This story hosts, action, adventure, romance, and an unpredictable happy/sad ending.

Please read it and let me know what you think. I've converted the story into a movie format and it is presently being reviewed by Sony and Paramount.

Thank you,
Gary Delfinno

yollyP. · Post by **yollyP.** » 26 Feb 2009, 16:56

Wow. This is exciting and yes, this will be a hit because of the new twist. I look forward to seeing this in a movie soon.

HillaryBrooke · Post by **HillaryBrooke** » 27 Feb 2009, 00:00

I hope the movie does the book justice.

ResonantAleph · Post by **ResonantAleph** » 27 Feb 2009, 09:39

Does anyone think this seems suspicious? He spelled his name two different ways, uses poor punctuation in describing the content of his book:

This story hosts, action, adventure, romance, etc...

Most murder mystery's pursue an evil person throughout the entire story...

and, instead of saying he has written a screenplay, he says:

I've converted the story into a movie format...

Doesn't this seem a bit strange coming from someone who claims to be a writer?

HillaryBrooke · Post by **HillaryBrooke** » 27 Feb 2009, 21:11

ResonantAleph wrote:Does anyone think this seems suspicious? He spelled his name two different ways, uses poor punctuation in describing the content of his book:
This story hosts, action, adventure, romance, etc...

Most murder mystery's pursue an evil person throughout the entire story...
and, instead of saying he has written a screenplay, he says:
I've converted the story into a movie format...
Doesn't this seem a bit strange coming from someone who claims to be a writer?

Didn't notice any of this until you pointed it out. hmmmmmmmmmm

KirstenGartmann · Post by **KirstenGartmann** » 04 Mar 2009, 16:29

You are correct, it is very suspicious. You might want to put some Aluminum foil around your head and on your windows. We certainly do not want anything to happen to you. PROTECT THE GREAT MIND OF AMERICA. Maybe you should apply at the FBI, there always looking for good Code crackers like you.

Comeflyaway · Post by **Comeflyaway** » 04 Mar 2009, 16:43

KirstenGartmann wrote:You are correct, it is very suspicious. You might want to put some Aluminum foil around your head and on your windows. We certainly do not want anything to happen to you. PROTECT THE GREAT MIND OF AMERICA. Maybe you should apply at the FBI, there always looking for good Code crackers like you.

I love it

ResonantAleph · Post by **ResonantAleph** » 05 Mar 2009, 07:41

Suspious. Wow. Well by golly! I can be unnecessarily critical as well!

KirstenGartmann · Post by **KirstenGartmann** » 07 Mar 2009, 16:23

I laughed so hard, I fell out of my chair.... Thank you very much..

Gary Delfino

OnlineBIZ · Post by **OnlineBIZ** » 10 Mar 2009, 20:39

thank you

Gary Delfino · Post by **Gary Delfino** » 21 Mar 2009, 13:37

KirstenGartmann wrote:I laughed so hard, I fell out of my chair.... Thank you very much...

Gary Delfino

Better Fiction · Post by **Better Fiction** » 21 Mar 2009, 20:34

The story is a nice twist on a horror theme we've see before, but the twist is good enough that this could be fresh.

As for the mistakes and all...I know writers who mangle the English language. I pity their editors.

Besides, all he claims is that the movie format he's written is being "reviewed" somewhere. No big claim. Nothing to tear him down for or even worth bothering to lie about.

What I don't understand is where and how we're supposed to "check out" his story.

Wade

KirstenGartmann · Post by **KirstenGartmann** » 06 Apr 2009, 11:54

You can get the book almost every where, just google the title. Amazon is where I like to shop.

akinimod · Post by **akinimod** » 07 Apr 2009, 07:01

KirstenGartmann wrote:You can get the book almost every where, just google the title. Amazon is where I like to shop.

AHH!! Amazon is the devil! It takes all my money away from me!

tylerdurden · Post by **tylerdurden** » 07 Apr 2009, 17:25

akinimod wrote:
KirstenGartmann wrote:You can get the book almost every where, just google the title. Amazon is where I like to shop.
AHH!! Amazon is the devil! It takes all my money away from me!

lol so true